Lumpy pudding

Judging a poem is like judging a pudding or a machine. One demands that it work. Poetry succeeds because all or most of what is said or implied is relevant; what is irrelevant has been excluded, like lumps from pudding and 'bugs' from machinery. (Wimsatt & Beardsley)

Here we celebrate the excluded, lumpy parts of the pudding!

Dec 2, 2009 11:57pm
Whoever degrades another degrades me, and whatever is done or said returns at last to me —Walt Whitman.
From the series Great Ideas of Western Man, 1958 - oil on canvas (Smithsonian)
Artist: Lee Mullican (b. Dec. 2, 1919)

Whoever degrades another degrades me, and whatever is done or said returns at last to me —Walt Whitman.

From the series Great Ideas of Western Man, 1958 - oil on canvas (Smithsonian)

Artist: Lee Mullican (b. Dec. 2, 1919)

Nov 23, 2009 11:09pm
Under an Image by Paul Celan Raven-swarmed waves of grainThe blue of which heaven? The lower? The upper?Belated arrow that rushed from the soulA louder whirr. A nearer glow. Both worlds.
(Transl., Bent Sørensen)

Under an Image by Paul Celan

Raven-swarmed waves of grain
The blue of which heaven? The lower? The upper?
Belated arrow that rushed from the soul
A louder whirr. A nearer glow. Both worlds.

(Transl., Bent Sørensen)

Nov 22, 2009 12:39am
Sweet Romanian Tongue by James SchuylerDrew down the curse of heaven on her umbrellafurled and smelling of wet cigarettes,Jo ran off in rain one pitchy night,one bloody a.m. found her staring, snoring.“Why do we all stay up so late?” Jo queried.“Though I don’t stay up so late as my friends.”She tripped the little bomb of wasps.They got her.Tears for Jo, four, each perfect, waspish.A silver tongue and piss-blond hairdecants a funeral oblation for the mouse.“She was a rare sight, a winning wonder.Jo cultivates her toothaches elsewhere.”(Source: Poetry, November 2009)

Sweet Romanian Tongue by James Schuyler

Drew down the curse of heaven on her umbrella
furled and smelling of wet cigarettes,
Jo ran off in rain one pitchy night,
one bloody a.m. found her staring, snoring.

“Why do we all stay up so late?” Jo queried.
“Though I don’t stay up so late as my friends.”
She tripped the little bomb of wasps.
They got her.

Tears for Jo, four, each perfect, waspish.
A silver tongue and piss-blond hair
decants a funeral oblation for the mouse.
“She was a rare sight, a winning wonder.
Jo cultivates her toothaches elsewhere.”

(Source: Poetry, November 2009)

Nov 19, 2009 5:59pm
3 Pages by Ted Berrigan
For Jack Collom 
10 Things I do Every Day play poker drink beer smoke pot jack off curse BY THE WATERS OF MANHATTAN flower positive & negative go homeread lunch poemshunker down changesLife goes byquite merrilyblueNO HELP WANTEDHunting For The Whale“and if the weather plays me fair I’m happy every day.”The white that dries clearthe heart attackthe congressional medal of honorA house in the countryNOT ENOUGH

3 Pages by Ted Berrigan

For Jack Collom

10 Things I do Every Day


play poker
drink beer
smoke pot
jack off
curse


BY THE WATERS OF MANHATTAN


flower


positive & negative


go home


read lunch poems


hunker down


changes


Life goes by
quite merrily
blue
NO HELP WANTED

Hunting For The Whale


“and if the weather plays me fair
I’m happy every day.”


The white that dries clear
the heart attack
the congressional medal of honor
A house in the country


NOT ENOUGH

Nov 19, 2009 5:54pm
Take the I Out by Sharon OldsBut I love the I, steel I-beamthat my father sold. They poured the pig ironinto the mold, and it fed out slowly,a bending jelly in the bath, and it hardened,Bessemer, blister, crucible, alloy, and hemarketed it, and bought bourbon, and Creamof Wheat, its curl of butter rightin the middle of its forehead, he paid for our dresseswith his metal sweat, sweet in the morningand sour in the evening. I love the I,frail between its flitches, its hard groundand hard sky, it soars between themlike the soul that rushes, back and forth,between the mother and father. What if they had loved each other,how would it have felt to be the strutjoining the floor and roof of the truss?I have seen, on his shirt-cardboard, yearsin her desk, the night they made me, the penciledslope of her temperature rising, and onthe peak of the hill, first soldier to reachthe crest, the Roman numeral I—I, I, I, I,girders of identity, head on,embedded in the poem. I love the Ifor its premise of existence—our I—when I wasborn, part gelid, I lay with youon the cooling table, we were all there, aforest of felled iron. The I is a pine,resinous, flammable root to crown,which throws its cones as far as it can in a fire.

Take the I Out by Sharon Olds

But I love the I, steel I-beam
that my father sold. They poured the pig iron
into the mold, and it fed out slowly,
a bending jelly in the bath, and it hardened,
Bessemer, blister, crucible, alloy, and he
marketed it, and bought bourbon, and Cream
of Wheat, its curl of butter right
in the middle of its forehead, he paid for our dresses
with his metal sweat, sweet in the morning
and sour in the evening. I love the I,
frail between its flitches, its hard ground
and hard sky, it soars between them
like the soul that rushes, back and forth,
between the mother and father. What if they had loved each other,
how would it have felt to be the strut
joining the floor and roof of the truss?
I have seen, on his shirt-cardboard, years
in her desk, the night they made me, the penciled
slope of her temperature rising, and on
the peak of the hill, first soldier to reach
the crest, the Roman numeral I—
I, I, I, I,
girders of identity, head on,
embedded in the poem. I love the I
for its premise of existence—our I—when I was
born, part gelid, I lay with you
on the cooling table, we were all there, a
forest of felled iron. The I is a pine,
resinous, flammable root to crown,
which throws its cones as far as it can in a fire.

Nov 15, 2009 12:32pm
Harry Crosby: Roots
tall ancestral
tongues in
unto the root of
dark-fingered
as the needle to the pole
as the shadow to the sun
fungi and mushrooms
and the root of a tree
dark-fingered
thrusting into
infinity
(1929)
Photo: Harry Crosby: Toy Horse against Mill

Harry Crosby: Roots

tall ancestral

tongues in

unto the root of

dark-fingered

as the needle to the pole

as the shadow to the sun

fungi and mushrooms

and the root of a tree

dark-fingered

thrusting into

infinity

(1929)

Photo: Harry Crosby: Toy Horse against Mill

Nov 15, 2009 2:01am
- Mina Loy: from Songs to Joannes, 1917, published in Others, April 1917, Vol.3, No. 6

Photo of Mina Loy by Stephen Haweis

- Mina Loy: from Songs to Joannes, 1917, published in Others, April 1917, Vol.3, No. 6

Photo of Mina Loy by Stephen Haweis

Nov 8, 2009 3:20pm
From Barry Miles: The Beat Hotel (Google Books)
Ecce Homo - David Gascoyne
Whose is this horrifying face,This putrid flesh, discouloured, flayed,Fed on by flies, scorched by the sun?Whose are these hollow red-filmed eyesAnd thorn-spiked head and spear-stuck side?Behold the Man: He is Man’s Son.Forget the legend, tear the decent veilThat cowardice or interest devisedTo make their mortal enemy a friend,To hide the bitter truth all His wounds tell,Lest the great scandal be no more disguised:He is in agony till the world’s end,And we must never sleep during that time!He is suspended on the cross-tree nowAnd we are onlookers at the crime,Callous contemporaries of the slowTorture of God. Here is the hillMade ghastly by His spattered bloodWhereon He hangs and suffers still:See, the centurions wear riding-boots,Black shirts and badges and peaked caps,Greet one another with raised-arm salutes;They have cold eyes, unsmiling lips;Yet these His brothers know not what they do.And on his either side hang deadA labourer and a factory hand,Or one is maybe a lynched JewAnd one a Negro or a Red,Coolie or Ethiopian, Irishman,Spaniard or German democrat.Behind his lolling head the sky Glares like a fiery cataractRed with the murders of two thousand yearsCommitted in His name and byCrusaders, Christian warriorsDefending faith and property.Amid the plain beneath His transfixed hands,Exuding darkness as indelibleAs guilty stains, fanned by funerealAnd lurid airs, besieged by drifting sandsAnd clefted landslides our about-to-beBombed and abandoned cities stand.He who wept for JersualemNow sees His prophecy extendAcross the greatest cities of the world,A guilty panic reason cannot stemRising to raze them all as He foretold;Across the greatest cities of the world,A guilty panic reason cannot stem,Rising to raze them all as He foretold;And He must watch this drama to the end.Though often named, He is unknownTo the dark kingdoms at His feetWhere everything disparages His words,And each man bears the common guilt aloneAnd goes blindfolded to his fate,And fear and greed are sovereign lords.The turning point of history Must come. Yet the complacent and the proudAnd who exploit and kill, may be denied–Christ of Revolution and of Poetry-The resurrection and the lifeWrought by your spirit’s blood.Not from a monstrance silver-wroughtBut from the tree of human painRedeem our sterile misery,Christ of Revolution and of Poetry,That man’s long journey May not have been in vain.— from Poems 1937-1942

From Barry Miles: The Beat Hotel (Google Books)

Ecce Homo - David Gascoyne

Whose is this horrifying face,
This putrid flesh, discouloured, flayed,
Fed on by flies, scorched by the sun?
Whose are these hollow red-filmed eyes
And thorn-spiked head and spear-stuck side?
Behold the Man: He is Man’s Son.

Forget the legend, tear the decent veil
That cowardice or interest devised
To make their mortal enemy a friend,
To hide the bitter truth all His wounds tell,
Lest the great scandal be no more disguised:
He is in agony till the world’s end,

And we must never sleep during that time!
He is suspended on the cross-tree now
And we are onlookers at the crime,

Callous contemporaries of the slow
Torture of God. Here is the hill
Made ghastly by His spattered blood

Whereon He hangs and suffers still:
See, the centurions wear riding-boots,
Black shirts and badges and peaked caps,
Greet one another with raised-arm salutes;
They have cold eyes, unsmiling lips;
Yet these His brothers know not what they do.

And on his either side hang dead
A labourer and a factory hand,
Or one is maybe a lynched Jew
And one a Negro or a Red,
Coolie or Ethiopian, Irishman,
Spaniard or German democrat.

Behind his lolling head the sky
Glares like a fiery cataract
Red with the murders of two thousand years
Committed in His name and by
Crusaders, Christian warriors
Defending faith and property.

Amid the plain beneath His transfixed hands,
Exuding darkness as indelible
As guilty stains, fanned by funereal
And lurid airs, besieged by drifting sands
And clefted landslides our about-to-be
Bombed and abandoned cities stand.

He who wept for Jersualem
Now sees His prophecy extend
Across the greatest cities of the world,
A guilty panic reason cannot stem
Rising to raze them all as He foretold;
Across the greatest cities of the world,
A guilty panic reason cannot stem,
Rising to raze them all as He foretold;
And He must watch this drama to the end.

Though often named, He is unknown
To the dark kingdoms at His feet
Where everything disparages His words,

And each man bears the common guilt alone
And goes blindfolded to his fate,
And fear and greed are sovereign lords.

The turning point of history
Must come. Yet the complacent and the proud
And who exploit and kill, may be denied–
Christ of Revolution and of Poetry-
The resurrection and the life
Wrought by your spirit’s blood.

Not from a monstrance silver-wrought
But from the tree of human pain
Redeem our sterile misery,
Christ of Revolution and of Poetry,
That man’s long journey
May not have been in vain.

— from Poems 1937-1942

Nov 8, 2009 3:01pm
The End is Near the Beginning
Yes you have said enough for the time being There will be plenty of lace later on Plenty of electric wool And you will forget the eglantine Growing around the edge of the green lake And if you forget the colour of my hands You will remember the wheels of the chair In which the wax figure resembling you sat Several men are standing on the pier Unloading the sea The device on the trolly says MOTHER’S MEAT Which means Until the end.
David Gascoyne

The End is Near the Beginning

Yes you have said enough for the time being
There will be plenty of lace later on
Plenty of electric wool
And you will forget the eglantine
Growing around the edge of the green lake
And if you forget the colour of my hands
You will remember the wheels of the chair
In which the wax figure resembling you sat

Several men are standing on the pier
Unloading the sea
The device on the trolly says MOTHER’S MEAT
Which means Until the end.

David Gascoyne

Nov 5, 2009 1:36am
Find­ing the names of birds here,of flow­ers, impor­tant, I say I mustknow them, name them,to be ableto call upon where their magicresides for me: in naming themmyself–to lay hold upon what­everquiv­ers inside the bird-​calls,the drip­pingof tail of wing–to know itinside my hand where powerof that sort lives& in my fin­gerswakes and becomesan act oflan­guage.
–Hilda Morley

Find­ing the names of birds here,
of flow­ers, impor­tant, I say I must
know them, name them,
to be able
to call upon where their magic
resides for me: in naming them
myself–to lay hold upon what­ever
quiv­ers inside the bird-​calls,
the drip­ping
of tail of wing–
to know it
inside my hand where power
of that sort lives
& in my fin­gers
wakes and becomes
an act of
lan­guage.

–Hilda Morley

Nov 4, 2009 5:22pm
C.K. Williams - Love: BeginningsThey’re at that stage where so much desire streams between them, so much frank need and want, so much absorption in the other and the self and the self-admiring entity and unity they make— her mouth so full, breast so lifted, head thrown back so far in her laughter at his laughter, he so solid, planted, oaky, firm, so resonantly factual in the headiness of being craved so, she almost wreathed upon him as they intertwine again, touch again, cheek, lip, shoulder, brow, every glance moving toward the sexual, every glance away soaring back in flame into the sexual— that just to watch them is to feel again that hitching in the groin, that filling of the heart, the old, sore heart, the battered, foundered, faithful heart, snorting again, stamping in its stall.

C.K. Williams - Love: Beginnings

They’re at that stage where so much desire streams between them, so much frank need and want,
so much absorption in the other and the self and the self-admiring entity and unity they make—
her mouth so full, breast so lifted, head thrown back so far in her laughter at his laughter,
he so solid, planted, oaky, firm, so resonantly factual in the headiness of being craved so,
she almost wreathed upon him as they intertwine again, touch again, cheek, lip, shoulder, brow,
every glance moving toward the sexual, every glance away soaring back in flame into the sexual—
that just to watch them is to feel again that hitching in the groin, that filling of the heart,
the old, sore heart, the battered, foundered, faithful heart, snorting again, stamping in its stall.

Nov 3, 2009 9:21pm
Infight among the Romantics (source):
“Writing to his publisher in 1820, Lord Byron declared: “No more Keats, I entreat: flay him alive; if some of you don’t I must skin him myself: there is no bearing the drivelling idiotism of the Mankin.” 
For good measure, he described Keats’s work as “neither poetry nor anything else but a Bedlam vision produced by raw pork and opium”.
In turn, Byron got it in the neck from Percy Bysshe Shelley, who described his fellow poet’s work as “mischievous insanity”. Shelley blamed this on Byron’s taste for “disgusting” and “bigoted” Italian women who smelt “so strongly of garlic that an ordinary Englishman cannot approach them”.”
Keats didn’t comment - he was too busy dying…
Keats, d. 1821, at 26
Shelley, d. 1822, at 29
Byron, d. 1824, last man standing, at 36

Infight among the Romantics (source):

“Writing to his publisher in 1820, Lord Byron declared: “No more Keats, I entreat: flay him alive; if some of you don’t I must skin him myself: there is no bearing the drivelling idiotism of the Mankin.”

For good measure, he described Keats’s work as “neither poetry nor anything else but a Bedlam vision produced by raw pork and opium”.

In turn, Byron got it in the neck from Percy Bysshe Shelley, who described his fellow poet’s work as “mischievous insanity”. Shelley blamed this on Byron’s taste for “disgusting” and “bigoted” Italian women who smelt “so strongly of garlic that an ordinary Englishman cannot approach them”.”

Keats didn’t comment - he was too busy dying…

Keats, d. 1821, at 26

Shelley, d. 1822, at 29

Byron, d. 1824, last man standing, at 36

Oct 28, 2009 12:18am
Dylan Thomas: POEM IN OCTOBER It was my thirtieth year to heavenWoke to my hearing from harbour and neighbour woodAnd the mussel pooled and the heronPriested shoreThe morning beckonWith water praying and call of seagull and rookAnd the knock of sailing boats on the webbed wallMyself to set footThat secondIn the still sleeping town and set forth.My birthday began with the water-Birds and the birds of the winged trees flying my nameAbove the farms and the white horsesAnd I roseIn a rainy autumnAnd walked abroad in shower of all my daysHigh tide and the heron dived when I took the roadOver the borderAnd the gatesOf the town closed as the town awoke.A springful of larks in a rollingCloud and the roadside bushes brimming with whistlingBlackbirds and the sun of OctoberSummeryOn the hill’s shoulder,Here were fond climates and sweet singers suddenlyCome in the morning where I wandered and listenedTo the rain wringingWind blow coldIn the wood faraway under me.Pale rain over the dwindling harbourAnd over the sea wet church the size of a snailWith its horns through mist and the castleBrown as owlsBut all the gardensOf spring and summer were blooming in the tall talesBeyond the border and under the lark full cloud.There could I marvelMy birthdayAway but the weather turned around.It turned away from the blithe countryAnd down the other air and the blue altered skyStreamed again a wonder of summerWith applesPears and red currantsAnd I saw in the turning so clearly a child’sForgotten mornings when he walked with his motherThrough the parablesOf sunlightAnd the legends of the green chapelsAnd the twice told fields of infancyThat his tears burned my cheeks and his heart moved in mine.These were the woods the river and the seaWhere a boyIn the listeningSummertime of the dead whispered the truth of his joyTo the trees and the stones and the fish in the tide.And the mysterySang aliveStill in the water and singing birds.And there could I marvel my birthdayAway but the weather turned around. And the trueJoy of the long dead child sang burningIn the sun.It was my thirtiethYear to heaven stood there then in the summer noonThough the town below lay leaved with October blood.O may my heart’s truthStill be sungOn this high hill in a year’s turning.***************
Croquet on the cliffside lawn at Pennard, Gower when Dylan and Caitlin Thomas were visiting Vernon Watkins in 1937. Photo by Watkins….

Dylan Thomas: POEM IN OCTOBER

It was my thirtieth year to heaven
Woke to my hearing from harbour and neighbour wood
And the mussel pooled and the heron
Priested shore
The morning beckon
With water praying and call of seagull and rook
And the knock of sailing boats on the webbed wall
Myself to set foot
That second
In the still sleeping town and set forth.

My birthday began with the water-
Birds and the birds of the winged trees flying my name
Above the farms and the white horses
And I rose
In a rainy autumn
And walked abroad in shower of all my days
High tide and the heron dived when I took the road
Over the border
And the gates
Of the town closed as the town awoke.

A springful of larks in a rolling
Cloud and the roadside bushes brimming with whistling
Blackbirds and the sun of October
Summery
On the hill’s shoulder,
Here were fond climates and sweet singers suddenly
Come in the morning where I wandered and listened
To the rain wringing
Wind blow cold
In the wood faraway under me.

Pale rain over the dwindling harbour
And over the sea wet church the size of a snail
With its horns through mist and the castle
Brown as owls
But all the gardens
Of spring and summer were blooming in the tall tales
Beyond the border and under the lark full cloud.
There could I marvel
My birthday
Away but the weather turned around.

It turned away from the blithe country
And down the other air and the blue altered sky
Streamed again a wonder of summer
With apples
Pears and red currants
And I saw in the turning so clearly a child’s
Forgotten mornings when he walked with his mother
Through the parables
Of sunlight
And the legends of the green chapels

And the twice told fields of infancy
That his tears burned my cheeks and his heart moved in mine.
These were the woods the river and the sea
Where a boy
In the listening
Summertime of the dead whispered the truth of his joy
To the trees and the stones and the fish in the tide.
And the mystery
Sang alive
Still in the water and singing birds.

And there could I marvel my birthday
Away but the weather turned around. And the true
Joy of the long dead child sang burning
In the sun.
It was my thirtieth
Year to heaven stood there then in the summer noon
Though the town below lay leaved with October blood.
O may my heart’s truth
Still be sung
On this high hill in a year’s turning.

***************

Croquet on the cliffside lawn at Pennard, Gower when Dylan and Caitlin Thomas were visiting Vernon Watkins in 1937. Photo by Watkins….

Oct 27, 2009 11:37pm
Sylvia Plath - ElmFor Ruth Fainlight I know the bottom, she says. I know it with my great tap root: It is what you fear. I do not fear it: I have been there.Is it the sea you hear in me,Its dissatisfactions? Or the voice of nothing, that was your madness? Love is a shadow. How you lie and cry after itListen: these are its hooves: it has gone off, like a horse. All night I shall gallop thus, impetuously, Till your head is a stone, your pillow a little turf,Echoing, echoing. Or shall I bring you the sound of poisons? This is rain now, this big hush. And this is the fruit of it: tin-white, like arsenic.I have suffered the atrocity of sunsets.Scorched to the root My red filaments burn and stand, a hand of wires. Now I break up in pieces that fly about like clubs. A wind of such violence Will tolerate no bystanding: I must shriek. The moon, also, is merciless: she would drag me Cruelly, being barren. Her radiance scathes me. Or perhaps I have caught her. I let her go. I let her go Diminished and flat, as after radical surgery. How your bad dreams possess and endow me. I am inhabited by a cry. Nightly it flaps out Looking, with its hooks, for something to love. I am terrified by this dark thing That sleeps in me; All day I feel its soft, feathery turnings, its malignity. Clouds pass and disperse. Are those the faces of love, those pale irretrievables? Is it for such I agitate my heart? I am incapable of more knowledge.What is this, this face So murderous in its strangle of branches? - Its snaky acids hiss.It petrifies the will. These are the isolate, slow faultsThat kill, that kill, that kill.

Sylvia Plath - Elm

For Ruth Fainlight

I know the bottom, she says. I know it with my great tap root:
It is what you fear.
I do not fear it: I have been there.

Is it the sea you hear in me,
Its dissatisfactions?
Or the voice of nothing, that was your madness?

Love is a shadow.
How you lie and cry after it
Listen: these are its hooves: it has gone off, like a horse.

All night I shall gallop thus, impetuously,
Till your head is a stone, your pillow a little turf,
Echoing, echoing.

Or shall I bring you the sound of poisons?
This is rain now, this big hush.
And this is the fruit of it: tin-white, like arsenic.

I have suffered the atrocity of sunsets.
Scorched to the root
My red filaments burn and stand, a hand of wires.

Now I break up in pieces that fly about like clubs.
A wind of such violence
Will tolerate no bystanding: I must shriek.

The moon, also, is merciless: she would drag me
Cruelly, being barren.
Her radiance scathes me. Or perhaps I have caught her.

I let her go. I let her go
Diminished and flat, as after radical surgery.
How your bad dreams possess and endow me.

I am inhabited by a cry.
Nightly it flaps out
Looking, with its hooks, for something to love.

I am terrified by this dark thing
That sleeps in me;
All day I feel its soft, feathery turnings, its malignity.

Clouds pass and disperse.
Are those the faces of love, those pale irretrievables?
Is it for such I agitate my heart?

I am incapable of more knowledge.
What is this, this face
So murderous in its strangle of branches? -

Its snaky acids hiss.
It petrifies the will. These are the isolate, slow faults
That kill, that kill, that kill.

Oct 25, 2009 2:17am
John Berryman: Dream Song 26
The glories of the world struck me, made me aria, once.—What happen then, Mr Bones?if be you cares to say.—Henry.  Henry became interested in women’s bodies,his loins were & were the    scene of stupendous achievement.Stupor. Knees, dear. Pray.All the knobs & softness of, my god,the ducking & trouble it swarm on Henry,at one time.—What happen then, Mr Bones?you seems excited-like.—Fell Henry back into   the original crime: art, rimebesides a sense of others, my God, my god,and a jealousy for the honour (alive) of his country,what can get more odd?and discontent with the thriving gangs & pride.—What happen then, Mr Bones?—I had a most marvelous   piece of luck. I died.

John Berryman: Dream Song 26


The glories of the world struck me, made me aria, once.
—What happen then, Mr Bones?
if be you cares to say.
—Henry.  Henry became interested in women’s bodies,
his loins were & were the    scene of stupendous achievement.
Stupor. Knees, dear. Pray.

All the knobs & softness of, my god,
the ducking & trouble it swarm on Henry,
at one time.
—What happen then, Mr Bones?
you seems excited-like.
—Fell Henry back into   the original crime: art, rime

besides a sense of others, my God, my god,
and a jealousy for the honour (alive) of his country,
what can get more odd?
and discontent with the thriving gangs & pride.
—What happen then, Mr Bones?
—I had a most marvelous   piece of luck. I died.

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