Lumpy pudding

Judging a poem is like judging a pudding or a machine. One demands that it work. Poetry succeeds because all or most of what is said or implied is relevant; what is irrelevant has been excluded, like lumps from pudding and 'bugs' from machinery. (Wimsatt & Beardsley)

Here we celebrate the excluded, lumpy parts of the pudding!

Mar 1, 2012 2:31pm
Richard Wilbur: JunkHuru Welandes worc ne geswiceσ? monna ænigum σara σe Mimming can heardne gehealdan. —Waldere An axe angles                                                        from my neighbor’s ashcan; It is hell’s handiwork,                                                                                   the wood not hickory, The flow of the grain                                                                               not faithfully followed. The shivered shaft                                rises from a shellheap Of plastic playthings,                                   paper plates, And the sheer shards                                                                              of shattered tumblers That were not annealed                                                                                    for the time needful. At the same curbside,                                                                                 a cast-off cabinet Of wavily warped                                                                  unseasoned wood Waits to be trundled                                                                             in the trash-man’s truck. Haul them off! Hide them!                                                                                              The heart winces For junk and gimcrack,                                                                                     for jerrybuilt things And the men who make them                                                                                                    for a little money,    Bartering pride                                                               like the bought boxer Who pulls his punches,                                                                                    or the paid-off jockey Who in the home stretch                                                                                         holds in his horse. Yet the things themselves                                                                                             in thoughtless honor Have kept composure,                                        like captives who would not Talk under torture.                                   Tossed from a tailgate Where the dump displays                                                                                         its random dolmens, Its black barrows                               and blazing valleys, They shall waste in the weather                                                      toward what they were. The sun shall glory                                     in the glitter of glass-chips, Foreseeing the salvage                                        of the prisoned sand, And the blistering paint                                        peel off in patches, That the good grain                                  be discovered again. Then burnt, bulldozed,                                         they shall all be buried To the depth of diamonds,                                             in the making dark Where halt Hephaestus                                        keeps his hammer And Wayland’s work                                   is worn away.— from Collected Poems 1943-2004.

Richard Wilbur: Junk

Huru Welandes
worc ne geswiceσ?
monna ænigum
σara σe Mimming can
heardne gehealdan.

—Waldere

An axe angles
                         from my neighbor’s ashcan;
It is hell’s handiwork,
                                     the wood not hickory,
The flow of the grain
                                    not faithfully followed.
The shivered shaft
                                rises from a shellheap
Of plastic playthings,
                                   paper plates,
And the sheer shards
                                    of shattered tumblers
That were not annealed
                                       for the time needful.
At the same curbside,
                                      a cast-off cabinet
Of wavily warped
                              unseasoned wood
Waits to be trundled
                                   in the trash-man’s truck.
Haul them off! Hide them!
                                             The heart winces
For junk and gimcrack,
                                        for jerrybuilt things
And the men who make them
                                                   for a little money,
Bartering pride
                             like the bought boxer
Who pulls his punches,
                                       or the paid-off jockey
Who in the home stretch
                                           holds in his horse.
Yet the things themselves
                                            in thoughtless honor
Have kept composure,
                                        like captives who would not
Talk under torture.
                                   Tossed from a tailgate
Where the dump displays
                                           its random dolmens,
Its black barrows
                               and blazing valleys,
They shall waste in the weather
                                                      toward what they were.
The sun shall glory
                                     in the glitter of glass-chips,
Foreseeing the salvage
                                        of the prisoned sand,
And the blistering paint
                                        peel off in patches,
That the good grain
                                  be discovered again.
Then burnt, bulldozed,
                                         they shall all be buried
To the depth of diamonds,
                                             in the making dark
Where halt Hephaestus
                                        keeps his hammer
And Wayland’s work
                                   is worn away.

— from Collected Poems 1943-2004.

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